1. “I’m Different!”
Admissions officers are looking for something in your essay that sets you apart from the pack. Don’t just rehash the awards and accomplishments section of your application – write about an experience that has impacted your life or your character, a life event that has made you stronger, some life circumstance that you have overcome, etc.
2. “I’m Special!”
Bear Bryant is credited with the quote "It ain't braggin' if it's true!" This is the perfect attitude for you to have in your college essay. Without being conceited, it’s okay to sell yourself. Let the admissions folks know that you have done some great things, worked hard at your academics, and have been a positive player in your community. Be careful, though. Lot’s of folks have gone on mission trips and have worked a time or two with the local animal shelter. College folks want to see a level of commitment that spans a period of time and shows that you are willing to stick to something and see it through – rather than just jumping from community activity to community activity.
3. “I’ve Answered the Question!”
Be sure to write your essay about the proposed topic or by answering the question asked. If the topic asks you to list three things you value most, be sure that three things are easily identifiable. Remember, college admissions offices get hundreds of applications each year. Don’t expect them to search for hidden meaning in your essay. Also, stay within any specified guidelines such as numbers of words or pages.
4. “I Am Not Wasting Your Time!”
Begin your essay with a story or topic that will let your reader know that you have something of value to say. Don’t just ramble and try to take up space on your paper. Be succinct, direct, and write what you want to say to the admissions officer as concisely as possible.
5. “I Have Done My Research!”
Do some research about the school to which you are applying. Is diversity important to this school? Is it a religious college? What are the dominant majors in the college? Knowing a little about the school will allow you to direct your essay toward issues and topics that are important to the officials of the school you would like to attend.